Thursday, February 3, 2011

Stylish and Versatile Blogger Tag

I received this from Hannah Marie of Distant Hoofbeats. I was featured on her blog a while ago, and this newest tag requires me to tag fifteen others and list seven random things about myself. Well, here goes.

The Tagged:

‣ Eimmac/Ranger/Trouble of FlintClan
‣ Primrose of Fiercepack
‣ DeutschGirl_95 of The Art of Escape
‣ Spyre of TwilightClan
‣ WCL92 of Haven Grove
‣ Amber of CinderClan
‣ Cheryl Wang of Inklings
‣ Warriors101 of TwilightClan
‣ Dawnstar of Fiercepack
‣ Celestah/Solar of NightPack
‣ Emily (formerly Ruby Flute) of Newly Turned Mutant
‣ Olivia (or Olive Tree) of Horsefeathers
‣ Shadowflower of the Life of A Canadian Girl
‣ Stargaze of Icestar's Warrior Cat Blog
‣ Alado/Mint(y)paw of Fiercepack

(I'm not sure that all these people come on here, or even know that this blog exists, but as soon as I start advertising, hopefully they will!)

The Facts:

1) I love running. Unfortunately, my school does not have a track, but I go to a track camp in the summer. Hopefully, I'll go to a school that has a track soon.

2) I am terrified of clowns. They are the one thing in this world that truly scares me.

3) I have soooooooo many storiesthatIhavestartedbutnevereverfinished. It is a great disappointment to myself, maybe someday I'll take the time to go and finish them.

4) Three books that freak me out (AKA, made me think for a while) are: Unwind (Neal Shusterman), 1984 (George Orwell), The Chocolate War (Robert Cormier)

5) When I'm bored, I raid my or my parents' closets and dress up like various characters from my stories.

6) I love chocolate. Except not dark chocolate.

7) My first blogger name was Skyheart.

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Poll Results

The poll results are in. Here they are:

Caption: 2 (22%)
Writing/Poetry: 6 (66%)--WINNER!
Followers: 0 (0%)
Random Raffle: 1 (11%)

The writing/poetry contest is the winner! The caption contest and raffle were a close second and third, and no one voted for the followers option. So, we are doing a writing/poetry contest. The assignment is this: write a short story or a poem about Akire meeting Healer Dawkins (the roaming healer who visited Lloches sometimes, and whose apprentice Akire aspired to be) for the first time. Here are some rules/details to help you:

‣ To enter your submission, either post it under here, or send it to my email (erika_purdy@my.ethelwalker.org).
‣ Your entry cannot be more than 500 words long.
‣ Akire was 7 when Healer Dawkins first visited Lloches.
‣ No copying others!
‣ Things I am looking for: good spelling/grammar, good character representations (Akire-wonderstruck, Healer Dawkins-kind, Ryda-doubtful, Xerin-encouraging, Athan-bored), attention grabbing (for stories, this means a good plot line, for poems, description and detail), foreshadowing (ex: Ryda shooing Akire away from Dawkins a little too quickly, Dawkins asking Akire if she wants to be a Healer, Athan wandering off after Emilie, etc)
‣ No outrageous stuff! (wraith attacks, etc)
‣ But, be creative!
‣ Have fun!!!

I would also like to do a caption contest sometime in the future (maybe as a Part Three thing?)

Sunday, January 23, 2011

Contest

Hmm. It's been a long time since I mentioned the contest. And it kind of didn't take off at all. But I have been advertising (in between studying, making cards for soldiers in Afghanistan, and trying to catch fish [Carson still hasn't let me near the fishing rod since I was pulled out of the boat by the last one]) and I have (hopefully) managed to round up a good amount of people who will comment.

But I still want a contest. And you still want a prize. So, what do you want? There is a poll up, and it will be up until the end of my exams, whereupon I will go over the results and air the winning contest. But first, the prize!

The winner of the chosen contest will get a cameo appearance on this blog. You will choose the name, personality, description, etc. of your character. Including rank (which is, do you want to be a doctor, or a scientist, or military personnel, or one of Teyla's people...etc)
Yours truly will work your creation into an episode. However tempting it may be to make your character one of the numerous and ill-fated "redshirts", I will not kill your character off (unless you want me to).

So, vote on the poll, continue coming on, and hang on. I have to abandon my laptop and go catch a space trout. Bye!

Thursday, January 20, 2011

Postponed

On the scale of bad stuff, exams=wraith

Wait, scratch that:

exams=wraith + mckay being an arrogant jerk + those pesky rebels (!) + mcgarret listening to classical music + getting shot + Mal + clowns + the Division + wasps + losing my memory + those bugs + having to wake up at 3 AM + Voldemort + those gangs that keep stalking me so they can get info about my father + Paladins + Lady Gaga

Sorry, I just incorporated about fifty shows/movies, real/fictional people, or storiesthatIstartedbutnevereverfinished into that list above. Anyhow, the whole point of this is the fact that I have mid-term exams coming up and I need to study. I hate to leave you guys hanging in the middle of such an awesome first adventure, but I solemnly swear, with blood, and spit, and crossed pinkies, that I'LL BE BACK!

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Akire Zyll Flickerclaw has officially gone fishing (with Carson [inside joke haha]) and will return in due time (AKA, as soon as she catches a fish and kills her cold).

Monday, January 10, 2011

Chapter 11: Escort

The sun filtered through the trees and cast shadows on Teyla, McKay, Sheppard, Akire, and Ford as they sat on the ground of the village. Keras and Ares were inside, discussing the team's arrival, while the others watched the population live their lives long before they should have.
"This is, without a doubt, the most screwed up way of living that I can imagine," Sheppard declared.
"Well, I knew this one man who lived underground for fifty years," Akire offered, but no one was listening.
"Never in my life have I felt so old," Ford shook his head, watching a girl of about ten wheelbarrowing a crop that looked like carrots past them.
"They seem to accept this way of life," Teyla said.
"They're kids. What do they know?" Sheppard exclaimed. "And they obviously don't want us around."
"Because they think that our presence will bring back the Wraith," Akire countered. "But it won't, will it?" The others said nothing. "Will it?"
"Of course it won't," McKay said, annoyed. Akire sighed in relief. "The reason the Wraith don't come by anymore is that when their Darts fly near the village, the electromagnetic field takes out their systems, like what happened to the puddlejumper."
"Why do they just not land outside the field and take the village by foot?" Teyla inquired.
"I'm sorry, maybe I'm not being clear," McKay said, without a trace of remorse in his voice. "Nothing works here. Not their stunners, their Darts--even their shields would function properly. I mean, why would they risk their advantage when there's a whole ton of defenseless people through some other Stargate?"
"We must tell them," Teyla insisted. "They are sacrificing themselves for no reason."
"What are we going to tell them, Teyla? 'Listen, kiddies, everything you believe to be true is wrong, and trust us because we've been here for almost an hour?' We aren't going to do anything before I have a look at those ruins."
"McKay--" Sheppard began, but he was interrupted by Keras and Ares climbing down the ladder from the treehouse. The team stood up to face the two Elders.
"We've talked it over," Keras explained. "You can stay until you've fixed your ship, but you must work quickly. The fact that so many full-growns are here from outside makes our people uneasy."
"Fair enough," Sheppard answered. "We'll work as quickly as we can."
"There may have been something in the ruins where you picked us up that, uh, caused us to lose control of our ship," McKay interjected.
Ares directed his next sentence to Keras. "They should be watched at all times." His voice was low, and Akire decided that she definitely did not like this man. Keras looked as his companion, then back at Sheppard's team. "I shall choose two of the villagers to keep an eye on you," he decided.

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"I'm still trying hard not to laugh at our escort," Akire suppressed a smile.
"Me too," Ford grinned. He, Akire, McKay, and the two villagers who had been selected to accompany them were now on their way to the ruins. The only thing was that the villagers were two young children, no more than six or seven years old. Ford and Akire had opted to walk in front of McKay and the children, and were now listening to the, for lack of a better word, interesting conversation that was being held behind them.
"Casta says you're a hundred years old. Are you?" That was the little girl--Cleya--speaking. She and the boy were on both sides of McKay, looking up at him as they skipped or walked along.
"Who's Casta?" McKay demanded.
"Me," the boy piped up.
"Where are you getting your information, Casta?"
"Why are we going to the old city?"
"I gotta check something."
"What kind of thing?"
Akire and Ford were now walking backwards as best they could to get a full view of the situation.
"It's...grown up stuff," McKay retorted.
"What's a grown up?" Cleya asked.
"Some one who's older than you are."
Casta's face brightened. "I'm three days older than Cleya. You can tell me!"
"Nice try, but you're not a grown up."
"But you just said," Cleya's tone was confused. "That someone older than me is a grown up."
"I don't need you to tell me what I just said, OK?" McKay snapped.
"OK," Cleya said warily.
After a pause, Casta spoke. "So, why are we going to the old city?"
"Ford, Akire, a little help here?" McKay called to them. Ford chuckled. "What do you mean? You're a natural!"
"Let's see how long we can be quiet," McKay attempted to talk to Casta and Cleya again. "Who can be quiet the longest, huh?"
"Well, I'm not a quiet person," Cleya said, proving her point to be true.
"That's not quiet, that's talking."
"Well, I'm not a quiet person. I talk a lot."

(If you want to watch a clip from the actual episode, about the last half of this post, here it is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xvf_kwArlp4
You may have to turn up the sound, and the quality is not so good, but it's a pretty funny scene XD)

Saturday, January 8, 2011

Chapter 10: Elders

[[The title creeps me out, no idea why...O.o]]

Sheppard's team walked into the village and were instantly stunned at what they saw around them. Wooden huts were built high in trees, and as they watched, two young children scurried up rope ladders that were thrown down to them. The strangest thing was that none of the people that they saw were over the age of about sixteen or seventeen.
All the children were going about business that you would see in a normal village: cutting firewood, sawing and nailing boards to repair huts, sorting fruits and vegetables. Akire glanced at her team. Sheppard and Ford were looking around in awe, McKay was watching the children with distaste, and Teyla--where was Teyla?
"Major." Teyla was bent over by a pile of large metal scraps on a mound of earth nearby. Akire, followed by the rest of the team, walked hesitantly over. The metal scraps were not laid at random, they had a certain pattern. With a shock, she realized that the metal pieces were parts of armor, and within this armor lay the skeleton of a Wraith.
"Now where'd they get that?" Ford asked.
"It looks like a shrine." Teyla was examining a bracelet on the wrist of the dead Wraith.
"You mean they worship them?" Akire asked, shocked.
"That would be a first," Sheppard said.
"It'd be disturbing," McKay agreed.
"Wraith bones." The boy who had lead them to the village had walked silently over to them.
"Yeah, we know," said Sheppard, turning his gaze to the boy.
"Why are they here?" Akire asked.
"It's death bird fell out of the sky years ago. We keep it here to remind us of how life used to be," the boy said. He had a strange way of speaking, almost as if he was much older than his sixteen years.
"Used to be?" Teyla asked.
"Before," the boy answered. There was a pause, and then the boy spoke again. "The Elders are ready for you."

☆☆☆☆☆

The inside of the hut was dark. Akire had climbed up into it through a rope ladder that was thrown down, and now she looked around her, getting her bearings. Two young men, looking about the same age as Ford, stood opposite them.
Sheppard spoke first. "Hi. Nice to meet you."
One of the men, wearing a headdress made of knitted vines, answered him. "I am Keras, one of the village elders. This is Ares."
"Nice to meet you," Sheppard answered. "I'm Sheppard, and this is Teyla, Rodney, and....you say you are one of the elders?"
"Yes," answered Keras.
"How old are you?" said Sheppard.
"Twenty-four."
"And that makes you an Elder?"
"How did you get here, Sheppard?" Keras asked.
"We used the Stargate to travel from our world to yours." Keras looked puzzled. "You know," Sheppard searched for the right words. "The big....circle thingy."
"No one has come through the Well for five thousand years," Keras said, looking around at Ares. The other man was staring at them with a hostile look in his eyes. Akire shifted slightly so that she stood behind Ford.
"Can I ask a question," McKay interjected. "Why is it that all of your...people are children?"
Keras studied each of the team members in turn. Akire looked uncomfortably back at the Elder.
"Please, sit," Keras admonished, settling himself on a vine-covered bench. The team followed his lead.
"Many years ago, the Wraith used to farm our planet, as we used to farm livestock and beasts of burden, except we were their herd," the young man began.
"Yeah, they seem to do that everywhere," Akire spoke up.
"Our ancestors fought them but our weapons were not strong enough. Our people tried to hide from them, but they were always found. None died peacefully. None could enter into the Eternal Rest. To die at the hands of the Wraith -- to breathe your last breath among such hatred and evil -- there's no way to move peacefully into the next world."
Akire nodded her head, understanding. Teyla seemed to be holding back tears, and McKay was trying, unsuccessfully, to arrange himself comfortably on the bench.
"Our ancestors decided that, to beat the Wraith, we must learn to think as they think. We ensured that we would never provide the Wraith with a crop worth picking," Keras galnced at Ares, who's eyes were narrowed.
The team looked at each other in confusion. "Defeat the Wraith by doing what?" Teyla asked.

"None of us passes the age of twenty four," Keras explained, which only puzzled the Atlantians further.

"And how do you manage that?" McKay said with typical skepticism.

"On the eve of our twenty fifth year, we make the Sacrifice, both for our people and for our own safe passage into the Eternal Rest." Keras's voice was steady.

McKay expressed his consternation rather loudly. "What?! You kill each other?!"

Keras looked at McKay with the air of an adult explaining a simple concept to a small child. "No. We take our own lives. And so the Wraith have not returned for nearby five hundred years."

Suicidal children, Akire thought. Wonderful...

Friday, January 7, 2011

Featured Blogger on Distant Hoofbeats

I have been featured by Hannah Marie's (formerly Elrania) blog, Distant Hoofbeats. I won her 300 posts movie quote contest, and my prize was this post, which you can look at by clicking here. I also strongly suggest that you check out her blog and follow it.

On another note...I am currently halfway through the next chapter of Akire's Destiny, and it will be published ASAP. I also am going to warn you that these coming Part Two chapters will typically be longer, and therefore take longer to write, so there will be more of a gap between when each chapter gets published. Please be patient, and enjoy the ride!

Vote on the poll as well!!! :)

About Me

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I am an energetic, fun loving girl who enjoys reading, running, and hanging out with my Blogger and real life buddies. I am a fledgling writer (mainly because I suffer from a critical condition of writer's block), who's favorite genres to write are fantasy, sci-fi, and sometimes historical fiction. I also am a BIG daydreamer, and can often be found by a window, fantasizing about a story that I have seen or read. I am also a huge quotist, meaning that I randomly shout out lines from shows and movies that most people haven't seen. Names I have copyrighted are: Akire, Kayana, Azza, Stella, Zyll(ah), Ayla, Kirwan, Jetstorm, Burnfang, and Flickerclaw.